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Malala's Magic Pencil

We has some super writing pieces for our home learning this week. Well done Class 2! Here are a few for you to read :) 

 

 

If I had a magic pencil I would change the car factories to chocolate factories. I wouldn't use machines to make the chocolate it would be by hand. I would make this change to stop the carbon dioxide from going into the sky. It would also stop all the cars from going on the road. This would stop people from getting poorly.

 

Finnley 

 

If I had a magic pencil I would like all the children in the world to have lots of food so nobody was starving or hungry. This would be brilliant because it is sad to see children less forunate than me.

 

Harvey

 

There are lots of different things I would change if I had my magic pencil but the most exciting idea is for everyone to be able to fly. I would use my magic pencil to draw wings on the back of people so they can fly. My wings would be furry, rainbow coloured super wings. Everyone's wings would be different. Someone would probably need to teach them how to fly! If everyone could fly they wouldn't need to go by car and that would mean also that there wouldn't be any traffic. This would help the environment because the cars are not used so no smoke can come out of them. Everyone will be happy because flying is fun.

 

Poppy